This one

the shabbiness of my shoes or the sounds of city traffic,

but no, no

No

what I like about writing for my weekly homepages
on the ellipsis website
is the chance to write publicly my most considered thoughts
in the so-called 'rough',
but to me informative, forms
in which they occur while thinking and while writing as a live process,
a record of 'what happened'

unthinkable to correct it
for that would be to falsify the record.